Score: 8

"i'll have to be slightly biased"

submission: Lucky 7 Crew = Fatjewfags

date: December 25, 2007

FINE I WILL BE BIASED. OK I WILL BE OK?

now, onto your flash, i think you could have animated more then just two frames, maybe in colour with a background would make it better too. I paused your frames and i think your drawings were quite good. Maybe you could have tried animating. I also found the music, if that played, you'd get a higher score. Maybe if you drew mouths too, it would be better. A lot of improvement to be made, but the plot is excellent.

Score: 5

"Promising Start..."

submission: song 2 - blur music video

date: November 23, 2007

I liked the Frame by frame Line thing at the start, and it was a shame you didn't carry it on (yes I know it takes a long time, but then the song is only 2 minutes and a bit long). I didn't understand the weird face either. The guitar guy was also OK. A thing to add is a slightly darker tone towards the outlines of things- it helps. The school burning, try making the flames move- it makes it look much more real.

But seriously, parts like where the man pushes the woman looks very irregular- you've just motion tweened it. The bits where no background (white) should have some, I think you'd get away with putting words for one or two sections, but you could have put the words on a T.V.

A good part was during the "Woo-Hoo!", there were only two actions. That part I liked. I think it was too literal (in a bad way) wherwe the person was touching the others hair during the "When I feel heavy metal", maybe you could have a look at the lyrics :) The muffin sections were just a gap filler too. However, I did like the guy slipping- an example of good animation.

A bit I quite liked was when the mouths of the pictures were moving, like in Fonejacker or some Monty Python stuff. I think it ccan be improved on greatly, but then it would be really good.

Score: 8

"For your first game, its fantastic"

submission: Icy Bubble

date: November 23, 2007

It was really good- the concept, the design etc. was really good. I liked the themes- water, etc. The obstacles were good- I think that the circle spinning things were a bit hard though...

It needs music- i think some icy music would be good- techno might fit in, i'm not sure. Maybe you could have as well as levels, themes- 10 levels of ice, 10 levels of fire and brimstone etc. I also think you could have made different shaped blocks rather then just squares. Another idea i think would be good is to show wind etc. with an occasional wind thingy moving across the screen. And just maybe, a choice of easy, medium or hard.

This game was really good. I think you should have expanded on your initial ideas... well done

Score: 5

"That was randomly weird"

submission: Hitler's SongRap

date: April 13, 2007

The sounds are nothing near German. The other bit with two people sounded like 2 ladies who got high on helium. Then there was a French accent.
Somehow it reminds me like something by the Black Eye Peas from my cousins music library where there was an echo.